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Re: Til Death Do Us Part
Wow, I love how you can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work! -Rick
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Re: The man in front
It's a really good poem. I don't like how the rythm kind of died in it, but I liked it still. Keep up the good work! -Rick
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Re: Winter's Sigh
This is pretty good. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: A broken heart.
This needs to be fixed. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: A hand takes yours
This is absolutly amazing. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Didn't Have a Camera This Time
I really like this Via. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Bloody Pearls
Really good poem! Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: All the Forgotten Things
O_O Very good poem. I loved it. Good rythm, good words. It's amazing. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: all you lovers of time
This is an excellent poem! I really like this. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Blue Manhattan
I like how it provides detailed stuff, but, it can be a bit better. I like it, but add more detail in it. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Spay and Nueter your pets
How does this inspire people? It doesn't make any sense. -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: My man
Excellent poem. I really liked this. It's suitable enough for school. I'm sure everyone will love it. Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Sing Softly--so
Erm, not really good with the rythm and words. I think this needs to be revised. Good luck with any future work, Keep up the good work! -Rick
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Clouded care
Welcome to YWS. I really like this as a starting poem. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward into checking out any future work you plan on doing. ...
Feb 28, 2008 -
Re: Don't Long to be a Chart
Hmm...Via, it's good, but it didn't really peak my interest. I think it can be done better. Keep up the good work. -Rick
Feb 28, 2008